List Maker, List Maker, Make me a List

Every year, during the week between Christmas and New Year's, I do a lot of reflecting and planning. Reflecting on the past year and planning for the one ahead. On Friday, I will be posting about my new blogging schedule for next year. But today, I want to talk about writing schedules in general.

It's no secret that one area I struggle with is time management. And with the deadline for my next novel only a few months away, I really need to get a handle on this thing. Having a deadline is both scary and exciting. Scary because...hello...what if I don't get it done on time? Breaking a contract is not acceptable to me. But exciting because I have something to work towards. Something I know will bring me immense satisfaction and joy (and eventually...hopefully... a nice royalty check!).

I'm a huge time-effective wannabe. And one of the ways I try to be organized and efficient is by making lists. In fact, I make lists for just about everything you can think of: groceries, what to pack for an over-nighter, upcoming events, things I want to purchase for the house, repairs needed for the house, articles I want to write, books I've read or want to read, the list goes on...(pun intended). Of course, my main list is my "to-do" list. I go nowhere without my Franklin Planner. Every day is ink-filled with my to-do's, both writing and non-writing related.

Here's the thing. I'm may be good at list making, but could use a crash course in "list following." Sometimes I spend more time making lists than actually doing the things on the list. Oh, I have good intentions, I just get distracted. A lot. Like with that pile of laundry, the movie I really want to see, and that darned Bejeweled Blitz, winking at me every time I sign onto Facebook. Discipline is something God has been trying to teach me for a long time. And I am finally ready - and willing - to submit.

But, I'm convinced there IS a specific schedule that will work for me. If only I can figure out what it is. So, I put out a call to my trusty author friends for help. All this week on Examiner.com, I am posting the tried-and-tested schedules of several other writers and authors. I am even holding out hope that one of their schedules will be the perfect one for me. If not, at least I hope to glean from them, possibly using an idea or two to create a custom schedule for myself. I encourage you to check out the suggestions posted so far on my National Christian Writing Examiner page.

So tell me. What does your writing schedule look like? How do you get it all done every day? Do you have a schedule that works or will you be revising your schedule in 2012?

What Have You Learned Lately?

"You learn something every day if you pay attention." ~Ray LeBlond

I was recently out for brunch with my writer friend, Kim. We were talking about writing (duh) and what we've been learning lately about the craft. In between bites of her steak and eggs, she informed me that she is a recovering head hopper. She used to have trouble sticking to one POV and would hop from one character's head to another within the same scene. This is a no-no because it confuses the reader. The general rule is the only time to switch POV's is after a scene break.

Kim's been working with an freelance editor for the past few months who has been teaching her how to conquer her head-hopping tendencies. Therefore, Kim is a recovering head hopper.

As for me, in the past several months I have been learning more about the importance of character motivation. About how it's so vital to know my characters inside and out before I write the story. As a Seat-of-the-Pantser, I don't take a lot of time to outline and plot before I begin writing. But putting a motivation in place, a root cause of why my character does what she does, is essential. Only when these motivations are clear to me, can I create a well-rounded, believable character who leaps off the page and into the hearts of my readers.

So tell me. Which aspect of the writing craft have you been learning lately?

Are You Celebrating Mork Month?

If you were born after 1982, maybe you've never seen an episode of Mork & Mindy. Maybe you've never even heard of it and have no idea what I'm talking about. But surely you know Robin Williams, who became a household name when he was cast as Mork from the planet Ork in this hit science fiction television show. Mork coined some popular catch-phrases of the eighties, including Shazbut (an Orkan curse word), Kay-O (instead of OK) and Na-Nu, Na-Nu (his trademark greeting).

Call me weird, but every time I hear or see the phrase NaNo, I think of Mork and the whole finger spread-greeting thing, which I've never been able to master (see photo to left).

So my question for you is, Are you Mork-ing? In other words, are you NaNo-ing?

Of course, you writers know I'm referring to National Novel Writing Month, where thousands of aspiring novelists write their hearts out, trying to reach 50,000 words by midnight, November 30th. It's a huge deal, and I'm almost ashamed to say I've never taken on the challenge myself. Not that I don't want to, but November is not a good month for me. I prefer to utilize the ACFW NovelTrack, which takes place in January, April, July, and October. Much better months for me.

Anyway, in honor of National Novel Writing Month, and more specifically, National Author's Day (which was on November 1st), author and ACFW President Cynthia Ruchti has put together a list of 11 ways to celebrate this "holiday." So whether or not you're participating in Mork Month, these are great ways to encourage a fellow author and celebrate the business of novel writing!

1. Hug a bookshelf and thank the Lord for the authors who wrote so you could read.

2. Go to the author's publisher's website and leave a comment about a favorite book.

3. Write a note (the handwritten kind) to three favorite authors...and let them know you're praying for them.

4. Look at Christmas list. Cross off silly things. Substitute with books. Purchase immediately! :)

5. Enjoyed an author's book? Buy one for a friend...and let the author know why you did.

6. Moved by something an author DID in addition to what he/she wrote? Say so.

7. Stop in at your local bookstore just to say, "My favorite authors are..." and thank the retailer for stocking their books.

8. Spend some time alone with the Author and Finisher of our faith.

9. Tell an author, "I'm someone who knows it's a 'real' job. Thanks!"

10. Defy procrastination! Post a review in a prominent spot(s). Your fave author will be grateful you did!

11. Some author you know is fighting discouragement in writing, family, or career. Make a difference. Pray.


Cynthia Ruchti is the current president of American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW), which she’s served in various volunteer capacities since shortly after she became a member in 2002. In her role as president of ACFW, Cynthia writes a monthly “From the President” column for ACFW’s Afictionado ezine. For two years she was one of four humor columnists for Afictionado’s“Let There Be Lite.” In 2007, she was the recipient of the ACFW Member Service Award. In 2008, Cynthia won second place for Women’s Fiction in ACFW’s prestigious Genesis Contest. Visit Cynthia's website at: www.cynthiaruchti.com

Lying for a Living

I've never been a good liar. When I tried it as a kid, I got caught every time. Or, if I didn't get caught, the guilt would eat me alive and most of the time, I'd fess up.

Don't get me wrong...I'm no angel. I'm just saying that lying just doesn't come naturally to me. When God was handing out consciences, he gave me an extra dose. For which I'm thankful, by the way.

As a writer, I've written my share of non-fiction. I've sold plenty of "fact-based" articles, how-to's and personal non-fiction essays. In fact, I make most of my freelancing income from "truth." However, I'll be honest. When it comes to writing, I love to lie!

Okay, so we all know that writing novels and short stories isn't technically "lying," but fiction is a definitely a legitimate fabrication of the truth, right? So there you go. Fiction satisfies my occasional urge to lie.

So basically, I write lots of truth, but my passion is lying--er, fiction. My goal is to one day make as much money as I do writing non-fiction. A couple of book contracts would be a start.

What about you? What's your preference? Truth or Fiction?

Speaking of fiction, have you entered to win Mistletoe Prayers that author Betsy St. Amant is giving away this week? Just leave a comment on THIS POST to be entered. The winner will be announced tomorrow morning.

First Lines = First Impression

Call me Ishmael. - Moby Dick by Herman Melville

It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. - Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen

If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you'll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don't feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth. - Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger

Once upon a time, there was a woman who discovered she had turned into the wrong person. - Back When We Were Grownups by Anne Tyler

You better not never tell nobody but God. - The Color Purple by Alice Walker

Of all the things that drive men to sea, the most common disaster, I've come to learn, is women.
-Middle Passage by Charles Johnson
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As we all know, first lines are extremely important. Not only do readers judge a book by its first lines, editors and agents often don't read past the first page of your manuscript if it doesn't immediately capture their attention.

If you're an ACFW member, you've probably seen this topic come across the Loop this week. I've really been enjoying reading all of the excellent first-lines from everyone's novels and/or WIP's (works in progress). I want to share a few of those that stood out to me. I'll include three of the first lines from my manuscripts, as well. Although mine are yet unpublished, the others are from published (or soon to be published) novels.

If her car hadn’t died that morning, Monique might not have, either.
-From Double Take by Jenness Walker

I marched into church on Sunday, not to find God, but to search for a killer.
-From Fudge-Laced Felonies by Cynthia Hickey

If I hadn’t zigged when he zagged, we would’ve knocked each other out cold.
-The Lady & the Impractical Jokester by Roger Bruner

Today was not a good day for a wedding. It was Lucinda Bishop’s wedding day and he wasn’t the groom.
-From Morning for Dove by Martha Rogers

It's not easy going to the Silicon Valley's most elite private school --as a poor girl.
-From Perfectly Invisible by Kristin Billerbeck

Unemployed. Single. And out of brownie mix.
-From A Valentine's Wish by Betsy St. Amant

A handsome man couldn't be trusted, Maggie Davis reminded herself, and a girl would be wise to watch out for the ugly ones, too.
-From Maggie and the Maverick, Book 3 in the Idaho Brides series

Here are three of mine:

I'm on the run. Unfortunately, not a very fast run. Heels have a way of slowing a woman down. Especially a woman who lives in tennis shoes, loafers, and flip-flops.
-Mind over Madi

Gym shorts...check. T-shirt...check. Water bottle...check. Nikes...nope. They were still packed away in a box somewhere from the move, six months ago. Shows how long it had been since I'd worked out.
-Dead Weight

Rose sat back in her office chair and stared at the computer screen. After a few seconds, she closed her eyes. Maybe when she opened them, the words would be gone.

Nope. Still there.
-Three Wishes

I'd love to hear your favorites. Or, better yet, the first lines from your own published novels or WIP's. Do share!

Beginning Your Novel

We have a special treat today! Please welcome guest blogger, Cathy Bryant, an author whose debut novel, Texas Roads, is now available. Be sure to check out her blog, WordVessel and enter her awesome SUMMER SPLASH contest where you can win a $100 VISA gift card!

Now enjoy this article on the 7 necessary elements of the beginning of your novel.


7 Reasons Why Your Novel's Beginning Is So Critical
by Cathy Bryant, (c) 2009

The first few pages of any novel are critical. How many novels have you started only to give up after a few pages? Here are seven must-haves for the beginning of your story:

1. Story Problem/Question

Every story has to have one. If your story doesn't have a problem or question, then what are you writing about? Why should the reader want to turn the page to find out what happens next?

2. Character's Desire

In order for the reader to connect with the main character, they have to understand what he/she wants. And ideally, the character's goal should make sense to the reader.

3. Hook the Reader

I can usually tell if I'm going to like a book within the first few pages. Sometimes when I force myself to keep reading, I'm finally able to be drawn into the story. But most of the time it never happens. The books I can't put down are the ones that capture me from word one.

4. Connect the Reader with the Main Character

For me, this is closely related with the character's desire. When I can connect with the character via an understandable desire, I'm hooked. But it also involves more. Is the character likable? If he/she's not likable, is there a good reason why? Do I care about the character--sympathize with him/her? Do I enjoy the character's personality? Is there something about him/her I can relate to?

This was one of the most difficult things for me in writing my own novel. The author walks a fine line between leaving room for the main character to grow by showing their faults/issues and making them likable enough for the reader to connect with. There is very little wiggle room between a self-pitying, whiny heroine, and a heroine who has experienced tragedy after tragedy and is having difficulty getting past it.

5. Set the Tone of the Book

This was difficult for me as well. I wanted to show my main character as someone who had faced a lot of challenges, but also wanted the tone of the novel to fun, zippy, humorous and romantic. Very tall order, but not impossible. You should know what kind of tone to set from the very beginning or you'll end up with a mishmash that confuses the reader.

6. Establish the Story World

Helping the reader visualize where the story is taking place is crucial. When the stage is set for the reader, it lends an air of credibility to the story--makes it more real and lifelike. This is true whether you're writing romance or science fiction. Without setting, the characters float around with nothing to connect them to reality. Use the five senses to help your fictional world come to life.

7. Establish the Conflict

Every novel needs conflict. Donald Maass, author of Writing The Breakout Novel, says you need it on every page. Without it, the story is flat and boring. The conflict should be both internal and external.

Check the first chapter of your work in progress. Does it have these seven components? If so, you're on your way to a great story. If not, try to add them in and see how much your story improves.
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A Texas gal since birth, Cathy lives in a century-old farmhouse with her husband and a phobia-ridden cat. Her debut novel, TEXAS ROADS, was a 2009 ACFW Genesis finalist and tells the story of a disillusioned widow's quest to find home. The book is available through Amazon.com. For more information, visit www.CatBryant.com.

Contest Corner: Family Circle 2010 Fiction Contest

To finish up the week of contest chatter, I thought I'd share a great short story contest.

Family Circle magazine is holding its annual Fiction Contest. Even though entries opened on March 1st, the deadline is not until September 8, so there's still plenty of time to get in on this one. And the best part (besides the prize package, which I'll detail in a sec) is that it's totally FREE! No entry fees. Yay!

Here are the details:

WHAT TO SUBMIT: A fictional short story in any genre. Two entries per person allowed, but each story must be unique (so you can't simply rewrite the same story two different ways). Entries must be unpublished.

WORD COUNT: Up to 2,500

ELIGIBILITY: USA and District of Columbia only, age 21 and older.

DEADLINE: September 8, 2010

ENTRY FEE: None!

HOW TO SUBMIT: By snail mail (bummer, I know!) See the official contest page for the address.

PRIZE(S):

• Grand Prize winner will receive $750.00, a gift certificate to one (1) mediabistro.com course of his or her choice, up to a value of $610.00, one (1) year mediabistro.com AvantGuild membership valued at $55.00 and a one (1) year mediabistro.com On Demand Videos membership valued at $160.00. Total approximate retail value of grand prize package $1,575.00.
• Second Place winner will receive $250.00, a one (1) year mediabistro.com AvantGuild membership valued at $55.00 and a one (1) year mediabistro.com on Demand Videos membership valued at $160.00. Total retail value ("RV") of second place prize package $465.00.
• Third Place winner will receive $250.00 and a one (1) year mediabistro.com AvantGuild membership valued at $55.00. Total RV of third place prize package $305.00.

For complete contest information and guidelines, visit the official Family Circle Fiction Contest page.

Good luck!

A Judge's Perspective - 4 reasons for Low Scores

Well, today is the day that Genesis judges are supposed to get their entries turned in so that scores can be tallied and finalists determined. The authors of the top 5 scoring entries will be notified sometime in the next couple weeks, followed by a public announcement of all the finalists. As a Genesis entrant myself again this year, I am waiting with bated breath and praying for "the call," if only for one of the three manuscripts I submitted.

But, I'm not going to blog as a contest entrant. Today, I'm speaking as a judge.

I had the honor of judging for the first time this year (no, not in the categories I entered - that's obviously not allowed). I'll admit, I was a little nervous. I am still convinced that I am not qualified to judge any contest, let alone one as highly esteemed as the Genesis. But I wanted to give back to ACFW, the organization that I've come to love and depend on for excellent advice, teaching, and encouragement.

I have to say I loved every minute of judging. I will also say that I awarded one perfect 100 - I seriously could not find one thing wrong with it. But that was an exception. The others ranged from the low 50's to one in the low 80's. Because many of you either have entered or will be entering contests during your writing career, I want to mention a few things that warranted lower scores from me. They may be things you want to pay close attention to when preparing your entry.

1. Weak opening. They say it takes editors one page of your manuscript to know whether it's one they want to represent. While that may be exaggerating a hair, the point is your ms needs to start with a bang. Horrify me, surprise me, or make me laugh. At least give me something that makes me want to -- no, have to know more about your character or story.

2. Basic blunders. I'm not talking about the ocassional typo or punctuational error. But when the entire submission is laced with poor grammar, incorrect sentence structure, and misplaced commas, scores get docked. The good news is, this is the easiest aspect of your writing to improve and fix.

3. Too much telling. You've heard it before: show, don't tell. As often as this phrase is tossed around, you'd think we'd all have it perfected. Again, it's not the ocassional paragraph or two that "tells" too much, but an entire story I can't get into because I can't "see" what's happening. I want to be plopped right in the middle of your scene instead of only allowed to be a bystander.

4. It's boring. This may seem harsh, and I suppose it's a matter of opinion, but if your plot isn't fresh and original, or your characters fall flat, I'm going to quickly lose interest. Too much backstory, too many characters to keep track of, excessive description (especially flowery), turns me off. Don't save the excitement for chapter two. Or, if there's nothing majorly thrilling, at least give it a dose of clever humor, real heartache, or something to make me care about what happens next.

While these points may not be a newflash, I figure it never hurts to remind writers what to focus on, particularly when entering contests that are being judged on only the first several pages.

So did you enter the Genesis this year? And are you as anxious as I am for the finalists to be announced?

FictionFinder.com

There was an exciting announcment made at the ACFW conference. I didn't mention it before because it really deserves it's own blog post.

A new website has been launched that will connect readers and Christian fiction in a new way. A wonderful way! It's called FictionFinder.com.

Here's what ACFW says about Fiction Finder:

Fiction Finder is an easy-access resource where you can find the latest in Christian fiction or that book you read 15 years ago and would like to find again. Explore the database and you justmight find a new favorite author or a current favorite's book you didn't know she'd written. Through our advanced search, you can search for books based on issue, setting, and levels of suspense, romance and so much more. Use this site to hone in on novels that appeal to you. If you like what you see, register for free at www.fictionfinder.com. Then the site can remember your settings to make return visits simple.

Seriously, you guys, this site rocks! You can search for books by genre, target audience (Children, Yound Adult, Women, Men, or General), or publication date. You can search for your favorite author (their picture profiles are posted alphabetically, along with the books they have written. And on top of that, you are able to see, at a glance, how much violence, suspense, romance, mystery, humor, spirituality, conflict, sensuality, and language is included in the book. These categories are rated with 1 - 10 dots. The more dots, the more of that particular element the book contains.

It's so cool!

Fiction Finder is in the early stages, and authors are still in the process of uploading their information for you. But there are plenty to get you started. This is an exciting resource for authors and readers. What an awesome way for authors to connect with their audience.

I hope you'll check it out and post your thoughts here.

Have fun!

Conference Recap - Cori Smelker, Finding your Voice.

Aren't you guys special to be getting a Saturday blog posting? I think so, too. There's just so much conference stuff to cover that I thought I'd insert this extra post for you to ponder over the weekend.

I had the privilege of attending two of Cori's workshops. The first was regarding interviewing the reticent client, which was excellent. But, since I don't do many face-to-face interviews, and I don't know that you guys do either, I thought I would blog about her second class because it pretty much pertains to all writers - at least of the fiction variety.

Cori titled her class You Got Style - Yes You do! Finding your Voice in the Midst of the Melee.

Personally, I have been told by many people- critique partners, readers and published authors - that I have a great voice. That's a huge compliment! Because once you have found your voice, especially if it's original and fresh, you have the potential to go far as a writer. Once a writer has developed a voice, it's common for readers to recognize it immediately, once they start reading.

Cori gave us a handout (LOVE those hand-outs!) with several tips on how to find your voice. If you're struggling with developing your individual style, try some of these suggestions and see if your voice starts getting clearer. I took a few of her tips (only a few of the many she listed) and expanded them with my own thoughts. Cori did a fabulous job with this - her wisdom and insight is amazing.

1. Play Games. Choose one topic at a time from the following list and write for 5 minutes straight about that topic. No matter what, don't lift your pen off that page (or let those fingers rest on the keyboard).

* Childhood memories
* Dreams and nightmares
* If I had a million dollars, I would...
* Things that are creepy
* Things that are sexy
* Best foods
* What I want most in the world.

The idea is that by randomly writing with wild abandon, aspects of your voice will magically emerge.

2. Challenge your preconceptions. Get inside another person's head and understand their viewpoint. For example, if you're a conservative, pretend you're a liberal and write an entire page defending one of their political positions. Or if you're an animal rights activist, write an entire page about going shopping for a fur coat.

3. Write from Passion. What are you passionate about? How would you argue that Jesus is the son of God? What words would you use to describe an event or cause you believe in? What makes your blood boil or your heart soar? Find those things and turn them into wonderful pieces of writing.

4. Take Risks. Think writing about something would be too embarrasing, too risky, or too challenging? Then that's exactly what you should write about. Think outside the box. Try a new genre or style. Can't stand science fiction? Try writing it! You may just find a voice you never knew you had.

5. Get a little help from your friends. Once you have several stories or articles written, ask friends and fellow writers if they can identify a specific voice. Ask them what's unique about it. What makes it exciting or dull? See what words they would use to describe your voice.

6. Write like you talk. Here is where I think many writers miss it. Have you ever read dialogue that sounds stilted and awkward? Maybe you've found yourself saying, "people don't say that today" or "she's talking like she's from the fifties, when the story is set in the year 2009." Pay attention to how you talk and try to write as similarly as you can. Unless, of course, your book is set in a different era. But even then, keep it as "real" as possible.

7. Remember, writing is about rewriting. Even writers who have a distinct voice spend plenty of time rewriting. The key is not to rewrite your voice right out of the story. Sometimes, due to critique partner suggestions or over-analyzing, we lose our voice somewhere in the editing process. Try to stay as true to your personal voice and style while at the same time creating an excellent story.

Thanks again to Cori for a fabulous workshop. I can't get over what a wealth of information I took home from the FaithWriters conference.

Pitching Lessons

I'm so excited to introduce you to today's guest blogger. Jenness Walker is a former critique buddy that I got to know through ACFW. Last year, Jenness promised to call me from the ACFW conference when the results for the Genesis contest were announced at the awards banquet. I'll admit, I thought with all the chaos, along with the fact that she had a little bit on her mind as she took FIRST PLACE in her own category, she might forget. But she held true to her word and called to let me know that I took 2nd place! Unfortunately, I went to bed early and didn't get to speak with her. But she spoke to my husband and let him know. LoL.

Jenness is a fabulous writer, so it came as no surprise to me when she announced last December that she landed a contract. Her first book, Double Take, is due out in October! That is one book I didn't have the privilege of critting and I really look forward to reading it.

So thanks to Jenness for offering her insight into the topic of pitching (not the baseball kind, the manuscript kind). I know you'll enjoy her style of writing (and bit of humor) as much as I do.

Pitching Lessons

I'm so excited that Lynda will be going to the conference this year. She and I were crit buddies, and I'm so glad I'm going to get to meet her in person. Since she's going to be pitching, I thought this "lesson" might come in handy. For those of you who have never had an agent or editor appointment, let me give you an idea of what it’s like. First, let me give you an illustration, because my husband was a ministerial student and I still get illustrations for everything...

Pitching is like cleaning a Jacuzzi—awkward. All gangly legs and cramping muscles and odd grunts. Believe me, I know. I’ve cleaned many Jacuzzis and hurt myself in about a dozen ways. Either by slipping on water while I’m straddling the thing as I try to climb out, or falling into the waist-deep tub as I try to scrub the other side, or conking my head on the faucet, etc. There have been other uncomfortable moments as well. Like when I’m crouched in the middle of it, cleaning the little jets, when my employer walks in. Stares in shock. Then laughs sheepishly. “I thought you were taking a bath.” Um, yeah. I’m one of those stop-and-smell-the-roses-or-take-a-dip type people.

So, that’s kind of what it feels like to pitch. For those of you who must have specific details, here ya go:

Step one: After months of hammering out your pitch, you wake up early the morning of the appointment, unable to fall back to sleep as your mind races a mile a minute. What if they ask about possible endorsements? Does your mother count? Should the serial killer really be the brother? Or should you make him an alien, just to go for that unique hook publishers are always looking for?

Step two: You make sure all your notes are handy, in some semi-organized fashion in your notebook so you have all possible answers at your fingertips. The conference already supplied your name-tag with your name and genre plastered in big bold letters across your chest. That could come in handy, just in case you forget.

Step three: You head down to breakfast, but can’t really eat because the butterflies are morphing into bats as the minutes march onward. You sing during worship time—you think—but, by the looks of the people around you, were probably in the wrong key. Or maybe just off rhythm, since all you can hear is your sporadic heartbeat thudding in your ears.

Step four: You follow the crowd to your first session, but don’t hear a word of the lecture that you had figured would be worth the entire conference fee. Thirty minutes into it, you scramble out of there in time to grab a dozen Tylenol, a bottle of water, and run over your cheat sheet one more time before your appointment.

Step five: They’re running a little late, so you stand in the hallway guzzling your water. Of course, by the time you’re up, you need to run to the ladies’ room. But you don’t.

Step six: You step inside the little room, gulp as the wanna-be author before you runs out sobbing, and sit at the table. You’re itching to take out your notebook, because you’ve just come up with the next best-seller—a handbook to all the symptoms of nervousness that are humanly possibly. Let’s see, there’s chattering teeth, fluttery tummy, nervous twitches, shaking limbs, strep-like tightness in the throat, hot flashes, cold flashes, oh, and you really, really need that trip to the girls’ room.

Step seven: Sinking into the chair, you try to remember what you’ve been told and find yourself silently chanting, “Editors are humans, too. Editors are humans, too.” The editor (Big E from here on) smiles at you expectantly, and you stumble through an intro, ending with a half-whiney, “I’ve never done this before” or “I’m really bad at this…” Though Big E probably wants to nod in agreement, he holds his smile and asks what you’re working on. Working on? Suddenly you can’t remember what you’ve spent the last year and a half agonizing over. Your hero that you’ve fallen in love with…what was his name again? In desperation you grab for your one sheet and shove it across the table. “Here.”

Step eight: Big E slips on his reading glasses and pretends to read your little summary. It’s witty, succinct, fascinating. A best-seller for sure. He “hmms” a couple times, then looks up. You take a deep breath, hoping he doesn’t hear you wheeze, and itching to jot that down as another symptom to put in your non-fiction book. But you’ve finally remembered why your story is so awesome, and you’re ready to answer any question he might throw your way and then sign the contract he’s surely going to shove across the desk. He opens his mouth—here it comes—and asks, “Did your co-author really survive a plane crash?” Um…yup.

Step nine: That final, telling moment. You’ve already passed your Dove chocolates across the table. Will that be enough? Or should you have splurged for Harry and David’s instead? Big E taps the paper a couple times. Then requests that you send your proposal. Or doesn’t.

Either way, they eat your chocolates. But they don’t eat you.

Moral of the story: Remember, sitting across from an agent or editor is kind of like being caught cleaning the Jacuzzi. So, if you are going to pitch, my advice would be to maintain your sense of humor, pray you’ll keep your balance, and be ready for anything.

Disclaimers: Chocolates are not actually required. Not all writers react the same way. Some of these facts may have been embellished. A bit. Maybe.





Jenness Walker is a romantic suspense author for Steeple Hill. She also co-authors light-hearted stories with Tracy Bowen. Jenness lives in Florida with Jason, her beloved website-designer husband, and Hyacinth, her almost-as-beloved laptop. When she’s not writing from her magic coach, she loves to decorate or plan her next roadtrip with Jason.

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Discover, Create and Publish the Novel in You!

I met Julie Arduini through FaithWriters and she has become a great friend (and awesome supporter of my writing). Julie is a sweetheart and has such a heart for God. Her popular blog, The Surrendered Scribe, offers some wonderful information on writing, great contests, and also some of her personal thoughts about this Christian journey we're on.

In February, 2009, Julie posted an article about the book, From the Inside...Out: discover, create and Publish the novel in you, by authors Susan May Warren and Rachel Hauck. Julie is graciously allowing that piece to be reposted here (told you she was a sweetheart). Thanks, Julie!


Sunday, February 15, 2009

Something for Everyone:
From the Inside Out: discover, create and publish the novel in you

I love the readers here because they are so diverse. Some are writers. Many are readers. But all, I believe, love contests. Today should please you all.

Authors Susan May Warren and Rachel Hauck are also therapists from My Book Therapy, along with Sarah Sumpolec. Susan and Rachel have a new book out called From the Inside... Out: discover, create and publish the novel in you.

I'm really excited about this book and I think you will be too. Here's an excerpt to show you:

Four Keys to a Writer's Life

As you prep for our journey, I want you to start exercising! We're going to get in shape! Work off the dust of our minds and tighten the flab of our daily schedules so we can utilize the writing time we have in our days.

Writing is much like every other discipline. It takes commitment. After all, as much as we'd like it to happen, those books don't just download from our brains automatically! It takes nurturing. Did you know that your brain has a well of words for each day, and you need to replenish those words after you use them? It takes time (something we're going to figure out how to get!), and it takes a game plan.

Let's start with Commitment. The fact is, writing will take you away from your family, your health club, your church, your social groups, your online gaming, your Sudoku, your television…you get the drift. There are costs. The keys to keeping those costs in line are:

1. Priorities
2. Balance
3. Perspective

Writing should ALWAYS come after spending time with God (that's also the nurturing part!) and rarely above family and church, but sometimes it does come before workouts and social life.

My friend Judy Baer (writing coach, extraordinaire) shared this illustration with me once: “Stand on one foot and balance. You can’t stand perfectly still, but rather, you have lean to different sides to keep your balance.”

Writing and life should be like this -- different sides require attention in different waves. If you are to invest in writing, then know that you might have to give up other things. Don’t worry—it’s not forever!. But for a while. If you were training for the Olympics, you'd have a training schedule, and it would ramp up when you had specific events to meet. Take a look at your life and see if you can carve out one hour per day, or three per week to invest in writing. Then, put that on your calendar in RED. It's an appointment. Be there.

Nurturing: Your brain needs a steady supply of new words, spiritual nourishment, research facts, and good writing to keep it fresh and ready to put prose on the page.

Spiritual Nourishment: Writing is largely a spiritual event. You are connecting on a thematic level with your reader, and that happens in the spiritual realm. Sure, we access many of these metaphors through emotion, but looking past feelings to their deeper meaning and sources helps broaden your understanding of your book, your character’s journey, and most importantly WHY you are spending time writing this book. Make a habit of spending time soaking in God's Word, or a devotional book like Streams in the Desert, or whatever form of spiritual food you need for your diet. I like to read theology books, but sometimes a great devotional book puts my spirit into the right frame to see beyond myself, to tap into the bigger picture and inspires me to write.

Research: make it your goal to keep up with the world. Technology. Medicine. Trends. Don't be afraid to use the Discovery channel for interesting plot ideas! Know what’s happening in culture and politics. Read biographies, current, and past – you’ll be inspired with new story ideas. Subscribe to Reader’s Digest and National Geographic. (At least TiVo the channel!) To communicate to our world, you need to understand it.

Read Up: Fill your mind with great writing. Start your writing time reading the Psalms, or perhaps a book of poetry. Read the classics, yes, but also make it your goal to read in your genre! Most importantly, find authors that are better than you and soak in their words, analyzing why they are fabulous. Feeding your mind and your soul will give you the materials you can draw from as you create.

Time: This is one of the hardest areas for new writers. Most of us don’t have hours in the day to wait for the muse to find us. We have thirty minutes after supper, or perhaps three hours on a Saturday morning.

Here's a few strategies for maximizing that time:

1. Plan ahead for your writing time and get your family to help you protect it. I have a sign on my door that reads, “Cry Me a River.” In short…they’d better have a good reason to come through that door when it’s closed (only if there’s blood or fire is the general rule). When my children were young, I always had an open door policy. However, I asked them to respect my time, just like I respected theirs. That meant that I spent time with them first – reading, helping with homework, fixing dinner – whatever they needed. I also involved them in the writing process. If they allowed me to finish a chapter, we’d celebrate with something fun (yes, there was a lot of ice cream in those early days). And I promised that when my first book got published, I’d take them to Disney World. I kept that promise. Enlisting your family’s help will free you from guilt AND give them an opportunity to share in your victories as you write. Make them your partners.

2. Keep a notebook of ideas that will invariably come to you as you wash dishes, walk the dog, clean the bathroom, drive to work, sit in a boring meeting, or even in the middle of the night. Sometimes you can't dash to your computer to put in that perfect sentence--so put it in your notebook. You'll have a collection of words and sentences to jumpstart your creativity when you sit down to write.

3. Don't clean up your writing space mid-project (okay, I know, that sounds like a messy person's excuse but...) if you simply walk away from your computer after you finish a scene, you'll be able to slip right back into it when you come back. I always suggest having a special room to write in so you can close the door, even if it's a section of your bedroom--something I did for years. I had a little garage-sale chair with a pile of books on the opposite side of the bed--my little alcove. But, if you can't find a separate space, invest in a little basket to throw all your writing gear in (research books, etc), and then set it somewhere where it won't be“reorganized” (as my husband calls it!). Keeping your research handy helps you maximize your time when you sit down and dive back into your story.

Finally, you need a Game Plan, and I'm not talking plotting versus seat-of-the-pants writing here--I'm talking about a little journal that you keep AFTER your writing session. Write down any thoughts you have for the next chapter, as well as your goal for the next writing session. Maybe you want to go back and revise the previous chapter or fix certain words. Maybe you need more research. Maybe you just want to plow ahead, but have notes for revisions.

Keeping a journal of your writing time helps you focus on each writing session without having to ask, "Now, where was I?" This is especially true if a week or more has gone by in between writing sessions.

Now, for all of you who have little children and think, "Hey, I don't even have time to wash my hair—I can't possibly find time to write,” my words to you are, well, let's see, greasy hair versus seeing your dreams come true. You can wash your hair when your kids go to school. No, I'm not that bad! I like clean hair, but I well remember the days when I typed with my children on my lap, or stayed up late with my laptop while my husband snoozed beside me.

He sure woke up when I got that first contract. *****Join me on the journey and learn how to write the novel in you!God bless you on your writing journey!

Susan May WarrenFounder, www.mybooktherapy.com

Goodhousekeeping Short Story Contest

I love contests. And I enter as many of them as I can, if only to get feedback on my work. Hey - winning or placing is just a bonus! OK, it's more than a bonus - it feels great and gives me something to brag about to all my friends.

I love to share contests with you guys because hearing about YOU winning is almost as exciting as when I win. OK, it's not nearly as exciting, but I still love to see my friends succeed!

A few days ago, I heard about this contest, sponsored by Goodhousekeeping magazine. It offers a great prize ($3,000) and some wonderful exposure. The winning entry will be published in the May 2010 issue of Goodhousekeeping, not to mention that every entry will be read by best-selling author, Jodi Picoult. She will judge on the following criteria: 50% literary merit and 50% style.

The wheels are definitely turning, as I try to come up with an idea for this contest. It would be SO COOL if one of us won! (A little more cool if I did, but still....)

You can find all the details in the July issue of Goodhousekeeping magazine, or read all about it online: Goodhousekeeping Short Story Contest

Good luck!

To Plot or Not?

Recently, a question was posed on a message board asking the proper way to write a novel. And, being the wise woman (or would that be wise guy?) that I am, I jumped in and answered:

The proper way to write a novel is the way it works best for you.

Oh, the wisdom!

But it's true. There are as many ways to write a novel as there are wannabe novelists. OK, maybe not quite as many. But still, when you consider all the different ways there are to plot a novel or not plot a novel, it adds up to lots.

Here are a few ways. See if one of them is you:

Die Hard Plotter. This is the writer who spends months - yes, MONTHS - researching, plotting, charting, mapping, brainstorming, outlining, and planning, before they even write ONE WORD in their novel. For me, the key word here is DIE. Because that's what I'll do before I end up a DHP. But hey, it works for some!

The Flaky Plotter - The snowflake method was created by author and physicist, Randy Ingermanson. It is a unique way of designing your novel using the "shape" of a snowflake. Many authors I know use (and highly recommend) this method, but I have never personally tried it. I keep meaning to, but anything that seems too much like plotting turns me off. However, this idea intrigues me and I intend to check it out.

Noteworthy Plotter - This type of plotter invests in index card stock. She has millions of index cards on which she writes each scene. Then, using a story board (or the wall), she arranges her index cards in different sequences to create a complete story. The advantage is that if a scene doesn't work in one place, you can move it to another. You can also "see" your story at a glance, spot any plot holes, and fix them, accordingly. My thoughts? Too much clutter.

The Chapter Master - Some writers choose to sit down, number a few sheets of paper with the number of chapters they intend for their book, and write a paragraph or so of what they want to accomplish in each chapter. This is a good way to loosely plan your novel so you know the main points and general direction you're taking but still have a lot of details you can make-up as you go along.

The Roman Plotter - For some reason, looking at a page of Roman numerals and letters and subletters, gives me flashbacks of history class. Shudder. But some authors find this type of structured outline to be the perfect way to organize their thoughts and plan the course of their novel. I say too much structure gives Lynda a headache. Just as history was not my best subject (OK, it was my WORST subject), Roman plotting is not for me.

The Invisible Plotter - Ah ... we finally get to me. If you visited me in my office, you would find no evidence of plotting. That's because all of my plotting is done in my mind. Well, most of it, anyway. I tend to mull things over, create plotlines and characters, and file them away in my mind's pendeflex. When I finish a scene or chapter, I take some time to just think and brainstorm about what will happen next. Once I get a general idea, my fingers start flying over the keyboard again. Works for me.

The Pantser - Last, but not least, we have the Pantser. The fly-by-the-seat-of-your-pants writer that could care less about plotting in any form. Plotting cramps their creativity. And who likes cramps? Pantsers simply write. And write. And write. And see where the story takes them. Of course, Pantsers are the ones who usually have to go back and fix lots of stuff later. They probably spend much more time in the editing than the writing stage because they didn't stop long enough to think things through the first time. But they don't mind. In fact, it's the only way they can write.

So what type are you? Do you extensively plot your novels or do you take the other extreme and wing it?

What it comes down to is that the way you write your novel isn't as important as just getting it written.

From Ear to Eternity in the Garden

While I'm on the subject of FaithWriters, and because it's Easter week, I thought I'd go ahead and post a FaithWriters Weekly Writing Challenge entry from 2006. Although I don't write a lot of biblical fiction, I love considering the lives of those who lived during Bible times. And I also like experimenting from time to time. This entry didn't place in the top 10 but it got pretty good feedback and I hope it ministers to someone.

Something big was going down. All of my training had not prepared me for the anxiety I experienced as I marched toward the garden.

Okay, I’ll come clean: it was my first important assignment as servant of the high priest and I was terrified. Not so much of the job itself; I had no problem arresting somebody. It was WHO I was arresting that frightened me.

But I would never – EVER – say that out loud.

To the average person, the “who” was only a man named Jesus. However, since that night I am convinced he was not just a man, but the son of God Himself.

I had heard tales; who hadn’t? Stories of a simple Jewish carpenter recruiting a smattering of loyal disciples, going from town to town, creating controversy with his teachings. I’d also heard of miraculous healings that took place – even people raised from the dead!

Initially, I dismissed the reports as phooey but my wife was not so sure. And late at night, when we lay in bed, she would talk for hours about this man, Jesus, and how he was changing the world. My wife has a very convincing way about her and to my surprise – and dismay – I found myself beginning to believe too.

There was a slight problem, though. I am a Roman soldier. And if anyone so much as suspected I was less than one hundred percent loyal to the Roman government, I would be killed - no ifs, ands, or buts.

I was not an idiot; I did not want to die.

As we drew closer to the garden to seize Jesus and take him to be tried before Pontius Pilate, I attempted to put my conflicting emotions in check. I scolded myself for acting like such a woman by letting my feelings take control. I squared my shoulders and pushed my emotions aside.

Like a man.

“What’s wrong with you tonight, Claudius? You seem...anxious,” the guard beside me spoke without glancing in my direction.

“Nah...just thinking.” I focused my gaze straight ahead as I felt beads of perspiration materialize above my lip.

The guard Hmphed, “I'm thinking how I cannot wait to get my hands on that crazy man. We will see if he still proclaims to be the son of God after some sense is pounded into him.”

I remained silent. Sweat now trickled down my jaw line, even though the night was cool enough.

I had never actually seen Jesus in person but as we approached and I scoured the cluster of men, I knew instinctively which one he was, even before Judas Iscariott walked over and greeted him with the “kiss of death,” as we soldiers called it.

Then Jesus spoke, eyes and voice strangely calm. “Judas, how can you betray me, the Son of Man, with a kiss?”

Judas averted his eyes and retreated as we moved forward to seize him. I drew my sword but desperately hoped I would not have to use it.

Then, with a loud shout, some maniac burst forth with a sword of his own and before I knew what was happening, a pain like I have never felt pierced through my head. I brought my hand up and, in horror, felt only wet, sticky warmth where my ear should have been. Looking down at the ground, there it was, in the middle of a dark pool of blood.

Before I could faint, Jesus reprimanded his follower and quickly moved toward me. He reached down, recovered my ear, and brought it up to my head. As suddenly as it had been taken from me, it was given back.

Despite the fact that he was about to be arrested, that man-slash-Son of God, took the time to tend to me. Could there be any explanation other than he was exactly who he said he was?

Jesus is gone now, although many say he came back from the dead for a time. Recently, I visited the garden again – that olive grove where he healed me. While I was there, a determination rose up in me that I cannot explain. Although I am still working as servant to the high priest, I am concocting a plan to escape with my wife and children and follow after the men who walked and talked with Jesus.

I heard once that life began in a garden. And I can say that is exactly how mine began as well.

What's in a Name?

I don't know how I found WOW - Women on Writing. Maybe it was through a google search or possibly from one of the writing loops I belong to. Regardless, at first glance, I loved the site. What a wealth of information for women writers!

I entered the quarterly flash fiction contest twice. Both times, I made it through the first round but did not end up in the winner's circle. I know they receive TONS of entries (I'm telling myself THOUSANDS!) so the competition is tight. But it's a fun contest and I encourage writers to check it out.

A few months ago, I submitted an article to WOW for their How2 column. I didn't hear back for a while and assumed it had ended up in the slush pile and, ultimately, the trash. But what a surprise when, six months later, I received a notice that my article had been accepted! I was thrilled to have the opportunity to be featured on this amazing site!

So now I get to share my article, What's in a Name, with you. It is now posted on the WOW - Women on Writing - website. In my article, I talk about some things to think about when choosing names for your fictional characters.

I hope you take a moment to check it out and let me know your thoughts. Here's the direct link: WHAT'S IN A NAME?

Genesis Afterthoughts...

First let me say that this morning I was still on a high from placing second in the Genesis contest chick lit category. But, you know, it's funny how easy it is to come down from a high like that.

Like, for instance, when you receive the judges' comments.

As thrilled as I am to have placed second, part of me is wondering just how I actually made it all the way up that high. Because, according to the scores, one of the judges loved my entry and one...well...not so much, it seems.

I should be used to it; after all, it's not like this hasn't happened before. Last year, this same manuscript finaled in another national contest. One of the final round judges loved it (even requested the full) and one hated it (scored me so low I came in 4th out of 4 finalists).

Don't get me wrong - I am VERY thankful for the feedback they gave me. It's not that I'm resisting their comments. Believe me - although of course it stings a little to get negative feedback, I'm not being defensive. I'm all about learning and improving my craft. I KNOW I'm not all that. I have A LOT to learn and I'm willing and completely open to suggestions and critique.

What confuses me is when two judges say the exact opposite things. One might say my voice is fresh, the other might say I need to find a fresher, more unique voice. One judge might say there is great opportunity for conflict and the other might say there is not sufficient conflict. One might say my main character is not likable, another might say my main character is totally relatable!

So who do I believe? Whose word do I accept as truth?

After the contest last year (the one where I placed last in the finals), I received a word of encouragement from the contest coordinator. This has stuck with me. She said that when a story causes two completely opposite opinions (in this case evidenced in the scores I received), it's USUALLY because the writing invokes strong reactions - either good or bad - and this is a good thing. That this USUALLY is the sign of an excellent writer. After all, the goal of any writer is to touch emotions, right?

So, I guess the moral of this post is, you'll either love my writing or hate it. Now the trick is finding an editor and/or agent who loves it enough to publish it! (And, of course, readers who love it, too!)

I have to add something, though. Like many writers, I have a "Writing Tip of the Day" posted on my blog. I love reading these and lately each daily tip has totally related to what I've been feeling in my writing journey. In fact, I just now checked today's tip and it says,

Believe in the quality of your work and the value of your message and at the same time, recognize surprises always happen in publishing.

I so needed to hear this today! I guess when I'm faced with differing opinions about my writing and style, I need to trust my gut instinct, believe in the quality of my work, and pray that God will help me to clearly convey the message He wants me to share.

But, even more important, is the Daily Snippets from the Word verse for today, which says,

"But even the very hairs of your head are all numbered. Fear not therefore, ye are of more value than many sparrows." (Luke 12:7)

This reminds me that no matter what others may think of my work, my heavenly Father loves me. Not because of what I do, but because of who I am.

Yep, definitely needed this today.

Forgive my ramblings...I plan to go over the judges comments with a fine tooth comb and perhaps beg for edits from a couple of friends and see what I can do with this manuscript to make it shine.

I sincerely thank the judges for taking the time to read and judge my work. I know that their opinions and suggestions come from a heart to help an aspiring novelist like me achieve success. For that, I am truly grateful.

Pushing Through

Last week, I posted a message to the American Christian Fiction Writers e-Loop asking for advice on pushing through my novel.

Here's the deal: I love my story. I believe in my story. I am excited about the possibility of it being published, along with two more books in the projected series. I have about 10,000 words to go before I type The End (which will be a HUGE accomplishment in itself - a first for me). The first several pages of this particular manuscript has finaled or placed in three separate contests. I know there's potential there.

But..

As I read over my previous chapters, I am getting discouraged and overwhelmed. I'm thinking about all the work I have to do. Fleshing out characters, adding depth, inserting scenes with more dialogue, subplots that need to be more thoroughly developed...ugh.

So after posting my "poor me" message to the Loop, I received oodles and oodles of responses from published authors, offering encouragement, advice, and a kick in the pants (which is what I really need most, by the way).

I was so blessed by these and wanted to share a few of the quotes I received. If you're struggling with pushing through and finishing your novel, I hope the following tips will help you as much as they helped me.

(The following quotes were used with permission. There are a couple who haven't gotten back to me yet, but if and when they do, I'll add them to the mix):


"Welcome to the world of writing, Lynda! LOL This happens EVERY TIME. With every story. I make myself sit down and write. There's no easy answer, it's just pure discipline. You do it because it has to be done. Once that first draft is done, then the fun REALLY starts! When you have that rough draft, you have something you can work with. The real work is still ahead of you. I just got my edits back this morning and I'm rubbing my hands together and about to plunge into my favorite part of the writing process. But to get here, I had to get that stinky first draft done. LOL So just do it. That's all I can tell you. It's discipline." - Colleen Coble, Suspense/Romance/Mystery Author of zillions books (Colleen's Website)

"Here's the deal (and I'm sure I'm oversimplifying) but I think most manuscripts are sold based on premise and writing style/skill. It's in that editing process, when you've had time to sit back and take a few month's worth of breaths that you can go deeper in your development. If the idea and writing are solid, well the rest verges on gravy. And you'll probably find that, as you work with a good editor, it's just as much about cutting as adding." - Allison Pittman, Historical Romance Author of "The Crossroads of Grace" series (Allison's Website)

"One suggestion. Stop pushing. Breathe. You are forcing it, and that will never work. Here's my honest advice (from someone who has FINISHED 23 full-length novels). Find a comfortable chair. Sit down and breathe several times very deeply. Instead of you running your mind, let it go. Let it slide through the story you now have, not critiquing it but living and enjoying it. As you do this, thank God for what He's already given you in this story and then ask for more. Ask for God's view on the ending, how does He want it to go, ask Him to show you the scenes in vivid detail about what comes next and how it ends. When you finish this, you should have more ideas about how to go forward." - Staci Stallings, Inspirational Romance Author (Staci's Website)

"Truly, for me it has been a matter of butt glue! That, and ignoring rewrites till it's rewrite time. Draft time is draft time, non-negotiable. Besides, as a good friend of mine (Donna Sundblad) once said, "You can fix bad. You can't fix blank." So I just throw the story on the page and worry about fixing it later on. My first novel needed 8 thorough edits before it was ready on my end, so anything shoddy is sure to get picked up at some point. so... just write it!!" - Grace Bridges, Science Fiction Author (Grace's Website)


"My advice? 1000 words a day. NO EXCUSES! Your book will be done in 10 days. Then set it aside.
Start a new book, maybe even finish it. So you can distance yourself from all the revisions.
Then, a month from now, when you're 30,000 words into your NEXT book (at a 1000 words a day) dive in at the beginning." - Mary Connealy, Historical Romance Author (Mary's Website)

"One trick I've done is to go ahead and write the ending/last chapter. Then I go back to where I stopped and write up to that final scene/chapter. But that's not terribly "in order," is it? :) And yes, it's very tempting to start thinking about a future project. You're right!! It's so much fun when an idea is fresh and new to us. But keep working on that last 10K. And don't work on "fixing" it until you're done. :)" - Lynette Sowell, Fiction and Non-Fiction Author (Lynette's Website)

I just want to say THANK YOU to these ladies who offered such awesome encouragement! And a special thanks to Grace Bridges for reminding me to invest in some Butt Glue (for some reason, that term just whacks my funny bone every time!)

Great tips, right? Hopefully, these words of wisdom will help other aspiring authors like me. I am now sufficiently motivated to finish that darn novel! As soon as I find that butt glue (tee hee).

Suited for Blessing

With Christmas less than a week away, I want to take this opportunity to post a story I wrote three years ago that actually placed in the FaithWriters Writing Challenge. I hope it's a blessing to you.


SUITED FOR BLESSING
By Lynda Schab

Stan finished putting on his suit. It was a bit tight but it would have to do. He looked at himself in the mirror and saw a tired, depressed, middle-aged man. A man who, at the moment, had lost pretty much everything in his life that meant the most to him. If it was possible to actually see emptiness, Stan saw it in the mirror that morning.

Missy left him two weeks ago. Well, he was actually the one to leave - at her request. And at the time, he didn't feel like arguing. Before he knew it, he was walking out the door, leaving his wife and two children, Justin and Stacy, behind.

He should have seen it coming. Stan had lost his second job in a year. He felt worthless as a man so he took out his frustrations on his family by yelling, criticizing, retreating, whatever he felt compelled to do at the moment. Finally, Missy couldn't take it anymore and she told him to leave. He didn't blame her; he would tell him to leave too.

Missy always talked about how blessed they were. She said she didn't care about how much money he made. They would move into a smaller home if they had to, or God forbid, put themselves on a budget! But that wasn't an option for Stan. He was used to living a certain way and he was determined to continue in this lifestyle.

The last thing Stan felt right now was blessed. Cursed was more like it. Losing two jobs in one year! He was now three months behind with the mortgage, and several other past-due bills were piling up. He wanted to be able to give his kids everything money could buy. And it killed him to know that he couldn't. Of course, this time of year was the worst. The holidays just compounded his loneliness and made him even more depressed.

At least he'd gotten himself a job. Not one he was particularly proud of, and one that was only temporary. But it was something. At least he would be able to buy his kids a couple of presents. Maybe he'd walk around the mall after work and see if he could find that video game Justin wanted. And the doll Stacy had mentioned.

When Stan arrived at work, he adjusted his suit and took a deep breath. This is only temporary, he reminded himself. Then I'll get a real job. He took his seat and tried to act cheerful.

Two hours later, Stan looked up and was startled to see Stacy, his daughter, walking toward him. She was the prettiest little five year old he had seen all morning! Missy stood with all the other mother's, camera in hand.

"Hello there, little girl," Stan said in his best voice. "Come and tell me what you want for Christmas."

Stacy looked at him strangely for a moment, then climbed up on Stan's lap. With an earnest expression, she asked, "Santa, can you do miracles?"

Stan was flustered. He stammered, "Well, I suppose…"

"Because mommy said the present I want most would take a miracle."

"And what is the present you want most, Stacy?" Stan asked quietly. He realized he slipped by mentioning her name, but Stacy looked unfazed.

"I want my daddy to come home." Pools formed in Stacy's eyes and Stan blinked his own away.

When he could speak, he whispered to Stacy, "I'll tell you what. God is the one you should be talking to about miracles. And if you ask Him to give you your daddy back, I know He will."

"Promise?" Stacy looked up at her father unknowingly, hope seeping through her tears.

"I promise," said Stan.

Stacy hopped off Santa's lap and ran to her mother. Before walking away, Missy cocked her head at Santa, her face a mixture of curiosity and confusion.

For the rest of the afternoon, Stan put more "jolly" in his voice, more "Ho ho ho" in his laugh. No need to look for the video game or the doll. He would give his wife and kids a gift this Christmas that was worth more than money could buy. He would give them himself.

For the first time in months, Stan felt truly blessed.


Copyright 2004

Faith Not Forgotten...Placed First this Week!

So after taking a break from the FaithWriters Writing Challenge to work on other things (namely, that NOVEL I still haven't finished-ugh) I got an idea for last week's topic - At the Pulpit - and decided to enter.

Well, results were posted yesterday and my entry took FIRST! WOO-HOO!

That means I now have three entries in the running for the end of the year's Best of the Best contest, in which all of the first place winners for the year are judged and the top three receive a nice cash prize! The first year I started entering The Challenge, I had one in the running. Last year, I had two. Now I have three! And with several more weeks to go in the year (the year being July 1st through June 30th), who knows? It could be even more!

Anyway, in lieu of this weekend's Blast from the Past, I will go ahead and post my winning entry this week. Oh...and I just have to say, the best part of this whole thing is that I received personal emails from several people telling me how much this entry touched them. And that's really what it's all about. That alone has meant more to me than you can imagine and made entering last week so worth it.

Here it is:

Faith Not Forgotten

For probably the millionth time, Linda watched her father preach. He had always been a dynamic speaker, who could invoke the kind of emotion that had you holding your sides from laughter one minute and bawling like a baby the next.

Kind of like what Linda was doing now.

She swiped at a tear as the memories bombarded her mind...

Five years old... Watching Daddy behind the big wooden “Bible stand,” as she called it. Eyes fixed on his face as she listened to his animated stories about Noah and Jonah and Abraham. And Jesus, of course. And when her daddy's eye caught hers in the middle of a sermon, his face broke into a great big smile and he gave her a knowing wink. While she didn’t understand everything he said back then, what she did understand was that her daddy loved her.

Twelve years old...Arms folded across her chest, huge scowl plastered on her face, looking everywhere but at him. She hated that her dad was the pastor. Hated being called "P.K." Despised being known as, “goody-two-shoes.” She did a pretty good job of tuning him out every Sunday. Church became a time for dreaming up ways to coerce her dad into changing professions.

Linda shook her head and smiled through her tears. Man, she had been a brat. She'd deserved a lot more than the scoldings (and the razor-blade elbow pokes) she got from her mother.

Seventeen years old...Sitting in the back row, giggling with her girlfriends as they passed notes back and forth about the boys they liked and the parties they wanted to attend. Ignoring the looks from other members of the congregation. She could care less what people said about her or whether she was embarrassing her father. He’d get over it.

Twenty-five...scribbling furiously in her notebook, trying to capture every word of wisdom her father poured forth. He always had fresh and thought-provoking ways of looking at God’s Word. She never walked away from his sermons without some new insight into scripture. And she always left the santuary excited about putting her faith into practice.

Now, Linda leaned back and just listened. She’d sat through this particular message several times but somehow it managed to encourage her more and more every time she heard it.

“Always remember...God never forgets. You think what you’ve done has gone unnoticed but there is someone who is watching. God sees the work you have done and will reward you.” Her father’s voice was gentle, yet firm.

Linda closed her eyes, relishing the moment. She breathed a prayer that he would stay calm until the end but, as she feared, his tone soon transformed into loud and belligerent. By the time Linda opened her eyes, her father was looking around, eyes wild and frantic.

“Where is my water? Who forgot to bring my water?” He bellowed.

It was time.

Linda stepped out to motion for help. She caught Ann Marie’s eye and together they hurried to the front of the room and up the stairs to the podium.

Linda touched her father’s arm. “Dad? Let’s go back to your room, okay? Jeopardy will be starting soon.” She said it softly, tenderly, so as not to upset him more.

“Someone stole my water." He yanked his arm away. “And I haven’t finished the message. I have to finish so I don’t forget it. Hebrews 6:10. Hebrews 6:10.” He mumbled the verse over and over again as Linda and the nurse led him slowly down the stairs and out of the manor’s small community room.

Linda blinked back more tears and patted his back. “It was a wonderful sermon, Dad. You did great.”

Once in his room, she settled him into his favorite chair and turned on the television. She sat down on the couch and offered up a prayer of thanks for her father. His memory was fading but it seemed he would never forget his faith.

More importantly, just as her father had taught so many times, God would always remember the important work her dad had done over the years.

The truth was, her father had touched many people from behind that pulpit and had left a firm imprint of the love of Christ on thousands of hearts.

She smiled at her dad through her tears as her heart swelled. At that moment, Linda felt that the biggest imprint of all was left on hers.